The "Good Morning" was VERY loud and about blew out my headphones. Maybe a quick mic check before recording the show would be a good idea. You then introduce you practice before introducing your podcast. The phone number makes you sound like an ambulance chaser. You don't need to keep repeating the phone number as it's a podcast, and you can put it in your show notes.
It takes a long time to get to your first case. Part of this is due to this being radio, and a radio format is different than a podcast format (but you could edit some of this stuff out). Also who is Jerry Wells? You just said he is here, but I have no idea who he is.
I would rearrange this and explain what the show is, explain what the episode is about (give a tease), explain who you are (quickly), do you disclaimer and get to the content as quick as possible (maybe even do your promotion for your practice after the first case).
The audio was good, and the intro had some cool production, but I would leave Soundcloud ( and sign up at Libsyn.com using the coupon code sopfree) and get a website (or point them toward yours and add the players to your website) and structure your podcast to get to the podcast as soon as possible and edit out those things that get repeated for radio out of your podcast.
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